Edited various mistakes; looks much better now. Bare in mind I haven’t started shading, colouring or rendering, even for the most of the background.
So here’s another sketch of the two main characters. I found a good reference of a Frost Dragon, so I scrapped Alduin, as the background no longer seemed fitting (and he lacks good references).
I am aware there’s something wrong with the composition, but I can’t quite figure it out. Critiques/ideas/suggestions would be appreciated!31 notes
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- godofindifference said: I think the composition is fine, I think though with the dragon where he is, he would be blocking a lot of the light along that path. If you were to add in that shadow the perspective would turn out a little more. Just a suggestion though.
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- galahawk said: The area beween them needs something more going on with it, like dust the dragon whipped up with its wings or footprints or even a little bit of the dragon’s elemental breath coming from its mouth. Just the path seems a little bland.
- plasmaterial said: I think it would help if they were aligned along the path more. Other than that, it looks fantastic
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